Sunday, September 8, 2013

We Must Evolve


There was a young white boy in my train car today
Wearing rich fabrics with wealth to display
His father put him on, wishing him good travels
Never meeting my eye, lest society unravel
"Young Master," I asked, "What would you like?"
He looked into my eyes, said to call him Mike.
"Have a seat while I look," he said to me.
"No sir," I replied. "Best I stand, you see?"
Young boys like him, spoiled at best
They don't think I know that this is a test
But then something happened I didn't understand
He looked up at me with the wisdom of a man
"You can rest," he said, "and we'll ignore our exteriors.
I won't be a white boy. You won't be inferior."
I stood in that train car, declining to sit.
I stood in awe of a young man's wit.
I kept on my roll, lest society crumble.
But inside me surged hope from a young boy, so humble.

Inspired by Magpie Tales
 

12 comments:

  1. Relevant and quite compelling. Well done.

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  2. "You can rest," he said, "and we'll ignore our exteriors.
    I won't be a white boy. You won't be inferior."

    This especially, sent shivers down my back - if only humans were better at ignoring exteriors...

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  3. Wise the man ignored the child's kind and naive response.

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  4. I vote you for President...let's get this inequality sorted out FIRST, then move on to less important.

    You presented an unexpected turn here, thanks!

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  5. OK, this one produced tears ... lovely, lovely writing.

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  6. I like the tone of your story. I have to say that I can't help but see the irony of a young white boy having to give permission to a full grown man, even though he did it with the best of intentions.

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  7. tears..but lovely indeed....thanks for sharing

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  8. This is beautiful! Wonderful take on the prompt!

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  9. Oh, a smart, kind, rich white boy. Sweet...

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  10. I firmly believe most of the KneeGrows must learn some self-control, too, as in Ferguson... anyway...

    You're a writer? Kinda, sorta? Me, too. Kinda, sorta. I know for a fact, however, you gotta whole lotta intelligence behind those two ears, girl; thus, I wanna give you my finite existence: to intrinsically value the Great Beyond which I’ve learned to appreciate, to visualize the fundamental reality of infinity is why I‘m here for a teeny-weeny amount of time. Looky here...

    Precisely why I had our ‘philanthropic + epiphany’ (=so much to give + vision): wanna see a perfectly cognizant, fully-spectacular, Son-ripened-Heaven?? … yet, I’m not sure if we're on the same page if you saw what I saw. Greetings, earthling. Because I was an actual NDE on the outskirts of the Great Beyond at 15 yet wasn’t allowed in, lemme share with you what I actually know Seventh-Heaven’s Big-Bang’s gonna be like: meet this advanced, bombastic, ex-mortal Upstairs for the most extra-groovy-paradox, pleasure-beyond-measure, Ultra-Yummy-Reality-Addiction in the Great Beyond for a BIG-ol, kick-ass, party-hardy, robust-N-risqué-passion you DO NOT wanna miss the sink-your-teeth-in-the-smmmokin’-hot-deal. Cya soon, girl…

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