Hear my every thought, the things that fill my head
I am ready for you to know me, the secrets that I hide
Unfold me like a love note and read the words inside
I stand here before you vulnerable and bare
Inhale me, envelop me, see me if you dare
I enfold my every desire in the softness of your embrace
I stand before you hopeful that you are my safe place
Unfold me like a love note ... perfect!
ReplyDeleteYes, Helen is right perfect! I love the idea of unfolding like a love note! :-)
ReplyDeletei really liked what you have done here...the words and rhythm you created are wonderful..
ReplyDeleteterrific flow in this
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